Peer Feedback For Short Story Rewrite

- This is amazing, its evident you really have a talent for script writing. The first draft was excellent, and the characters deeply believable . On the rewrite, it only gets better and stronger. I think if you did three more drafts you could be writing master pieces! Awesome work, keep it up! -

- I really like it and i prefer the rewrite of the script 

- Keep it up rosie 

- I prefer the rewrite as its more interesting and keeps the reader more entertained.

- The re-write is more interesting to read